L.G. state + and - in a film review.                 S.O.S 2 + positives. 2 - positives  

It came from the sea. It was not just a cloud… It gave himself personification. That means god.       

The cloud is huye… And it was made of more. The wind can not camard him. And he was not like the other clouds he was nice.

He hlpy people that are in need of a re skiing. Like a five or a caat in a tree.

I think that it is a five star rating. And i think that if you are 10-20 years old then you can work it.

                           By jenna A

If you like imaginashon. Movies or books .I think that you will like taking flight. It is about they imaginashon in the world they when in the gall  they when to the mone. But you are probably wondering how this all started wall the little boy saw a photo on the top shalf in the garig. I think that it would be a 4 to 6 year olds book. I think that this book would be 5 star. I hope that you learnt something.

               WAR

War a cold place the thousands of people died in action. It was sad for the familys that had people in wars. We have to rmeb the people that died. And the people that went missing in the war.                                                                     

Anzac day is to remember the people that died on the battle. Felld and the people that went missing in war and the people that are laing they now with the popes over them now.

The trenches are long,dep and step. In war the man go down into the trenches. Went it was night most of the wood. Be in the trenches for them.

They had tanks and planes,cars and every other thing they we have to day they did not have Tvs in the holiday.

I hope that you have lrn something out of this      

                        `By jenna

L.G. use worbs to cenuince someone to your ibea.

Dear Mr peters

I am  writing to you to pick National for a coalition for the gouernment

                       Clean rivers

Labouer is going to be geting money from tax went it can be going to the people that need it. Not THE RIVERS!!! They are very ding because they have no food to eat.And no planki of theys to ceap them woom. so  please help the people in povatey that are ding because they have no food to eat so please vowt for National.

                           Petearl        

Petearl risis and it is going to go up in walingtin for the government so they have mony for the rivers.   

                            Money     

Money is a evily thing to have you can have pets with it.

S.P.S Master chef 2017!!!

L.G. use adverbs

Monday was Master chef 2017. We were busy setting the table and making them look beautiful like the french flamingos. We were always giving them food to eat.

We had lots of tips in the tip jar.$22.30 to be exact.we are going give Marlene a gift. We had only 18 people, not 20 and we had lots of money left in master chef.It was so much fun doing master chef . I love It.

For the Entree we served onion soup. It was a bit too oniony for me. Then for the main it was Tartiflette and. Dessert was chocolate mousse! It was the best out of all of them. Master chef happens only yearly not weekly.We all had fun!!!

    Cow and calf

As I look at the cow in the pavelec giving birth to a small calf like a pen .I feel I like i am flying over them.And it look like the calf it is out. And she breaths like there is no tomorrow. The calf is brown with spots.  

The calf looks like it is all covered in slime but it is just after birth on it, not slime. Then the mother liks it off of the calf and then the farmer gets the calf.

The calf gos into a calf shed and they feed the calf and then gos into a padik that is as big as the sun .We give them a calfateria in the paddock.

The calf has to stay like it for 279 days or 287 days. That is a long time before it is a cow If the cow does not have a calf it will not have milk.

                   By Jenna

L.G. is to use fst and Cl   

Mr D has blond hair like. Reeces to but he has no kirls ls in it.He also his blue eyes like the sky and the bluebirds that fly in it to.

He always wears jens he has alot of jens he has blond,blue and yellow.He has brown shoes that are so pointing like a pen.

He is also funny like a clown.And he is also bubbly like a soft drink.He is helpful like a pen that always writes.

He plays rugby like a bowl that is running for his live.He also plays cricket that is fast and faster and faster.