L.G. state + and - in a film review.                 S.O.S 2 + positives. 2 - positives  

It came from the sea. It was not just a cloud… It gave himself personification. That means god.       

The cloud is huye… And it was made of more. The wind can not camard him. And he was not like the other clouds he was nice.

He hlpy people that are in need of a re skiing. Like a five or a caat in a tree.

I think that it is a five star rating. And i think that if you are 10-20 years old then you can work it.

                           By jenna A

If you like imaginashon. Movies or books .I think that you will like taking flight. It is about they imaginashon in the world they when in the gall  they when to the mone. But you are probably wondering how this all started wall the little boy saw a photo on the top shalf in the garig. I think that it would be a 4 to 6 year olds book. I think that this book would be 5 star. I hope that you learnt something.

               WAR

War a cold place the thousands of people died in action. It was sad for the familys that had people in wars. We have to rmeb the people that died. And the people that went missing in the war.                                                                     

Anzac day is to remember the people that died on the battle. Felld and the people that went missing in war and the people that are laing they now with the popes over them now.

The trenches are long,dep and step. In war the man go down into the trenches. Went it was night most of the wood. Be in the trenches for them.

They had tanks and planes,cars and every other thing they we have to day they did not have Tvs in the holiday.

I hope that you have lrn something out of this      

                        `By jenna

L.G. use worbs to cenuince someone to your ibea.

Dear Mr peters

I am  writing to you to pick National for a coalition for the gouernment

                       Clean rivers

Labouer is going to be geting money from tax went it can be going to the people that need it. Not THE RIVERS!!! They are very ding because they have no food to eat.And no planki of theys to ceap them woom. so  please help the people in povatey that are ding because they have no food to eat so please vowt for National.

                           Petearl        

Petearl risis and it is going to go up in walingtin for the government so they have mony for the rivers.   

                            Money     

Money is a evily thing to have you can have pets with it.

S.P.S Master chef 2017!!!

L.G. use adverbs

Monday was Master chef 2017. We were busy setting the table and making them look beautiful like the french flamingos. We were always giving them food to eat.

We had lots of tips in the tip jar.$22.30 to be exact.we are going give Marlene a gift. We had only 18 people, not 20 and we had lots of money left in master chef.It was so much fun doing master chef . I love It.

For the Entree we served onion soup. It was a bit too oniony for me. Then for the main it was Tartiflette and. Dessert was chocolate mousse! It was the best out of all of them. Master chef happens only yearly not weekly.We all had fun!!!

    Cow and calf

As I look at the cow in the pavelec giving birth to a small calf like a pen .I feel I like i am flying over them.And it look like the calf it is out. And she breaths like there is no tomorrow. The calf is brown with spots.  

The calf looks like it is all covered in slime but it is just after birth on it, not slime. Then the mother liks it off of the calf and then the farmer gets the calf.

The calf gos into a calf shed and they feed the calf and then gos into a padik that is as big as the sun .We give them a calfateria in the paddock.

The calf has to stay like it for 279 days or 287 days. That is a long time before it is a cow If the cow does not have a calf it will not have milk.

                   By Jenna

L.G. is to use fst and Cl   

Mr D has blond hair like. Reeces to but he has no kirls ls in it.He also his blue eyes like the sky and the bluebirds that fly in it to.

He always wears jens he has alot of jens he has blond,blue and yellow.He has brown shoes that are so pointing like a pen.

He is also funny like a clown.And he is also bubbly like a soft drink.He is helpful like a pen that always writes.

He plays rugby like a bowl that is running for his live.He also plays cricket that is fast and faster and faster.

       The Taranaki cross country!!!!

L.G. fst and c.l.

I was running in the muddy mud.It was black like the night sky but I went through the mud with the others in the race.

There was loads and loads of kids In the race and we were all in bare feet we when up the hill.

And It was the hill that had the bumps in it I when so so so fast I when faster and faster and I got 61st.

I when to my Mum and Dad I was breathing harder  and harder Mum and Dad told me good job Jenna.Thank you mum and dad I told them. When is zoe and josh’s race.

          By Jenna A

               Making a cake

L.G. use adjectives to add detail

“Hi mum”can we start cooking now i cried! Yes we can Jenna. Cocadodow mow mow mow went the big fat hen and the cow.

Ok “we were going to make a large beautiful cake”

but i forgot the recipe.

But i did find a cupcake recipe that i would like to make for you 1. Hound lanut yummy mmm theys are so so so!!! good.

               Making a cake

L.G. use adjectives to add detail

“Hi mum”can we start cooking now i cried! Yes we can Jenna. Cocadodow mow mow mow went the big fat hen and the cow.

Ok “we were going to make a large beautiful cake”

but i forgot the recipe.

But i did find a cupcake recipe that i would like to make for you 1. Hound lanut yummy mmm theys are so so so!!! good.

How to teleport

L.G.use precise verbs

S.O.S haven’t used get grab or put.- include hummer

Min 6 steps

Max of 10 step

If you want to teleport you will need to be an alien but if you are with a alien you will be ok.

You will need

. buy a teleporter at a soop

.a alien

.a egg

. and you

Step1 - go into the teleport.

Step2 - turn it on with the aliens help.

Step3 -throw the dog in first then throw the egg on it.

Step4 - then you and the go in.

Step5 -then the egg grows on the dog before the human.

Step6 -now on the human.

Step7 -he make the wing it and he go’s and fly it.

If you are successful you will of teleport and halped the man.

How to make french toast  

Purpose-
Audience-my mum and dad.

l.G. use language appropriate for your audience.

S.o.s BV
If you like to make food that is yum then listen to me.

.Materials

.bred x1
.sugar
.milk
.cinnamon
.eggx3
.bater

Step 1- get the eggs and crack them into a bowl.

Step 2-put the milk,sorer and cinnamon all in the bowl. Then stir it.

Step 3-get the bred and put it into a pan on the alumni

Step 4-get the spatula and flip it if you think that thar it is done.

Step 5-do the other side.

Step 6- and to top it off put it on the play and you are done.

If you have done it good you will have a good breakfast


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L.G use precise word to give acurate to my reader

S.O.S -precise nouns - include your materials in your sleep -descriptive verbs -cleanlreplace - bossy verbs at the start of the sententence.

Hay do you want to play with something that can not say no you can not play with me.

you will need.

.Glue gun

.Cup’s

.vivid

.screwdriver

.squer

Step 1-get the screwdriver and put a hole into two caps.

Step 2-get the hot glue gun and glue the two caps together.pgr

Step 3- put the squer  in the hole. And make sureyou have a heleper

Step 4-and make sure it is sticking out on both sides.

Step 5-then glue the small caps on the out side.

Step 6-wait for them to dry or put it under cold water.

Step 7-then you gule on the end of the squer.

Step 8- then you are done with your diy fidget spinner

                              BY Jenna

                 Pet day

L.g.use parogrophs to orgoneise my idaci S.O.S use time connectives to order paragraphs e.g. firstly. Finally

Introduce argument at the start of each parograph. Mr ELDER we should have a pet day that we would be able to saw our pet off to our friends here are 3 reasons why.1p firstly it is so fun to train a dog. Why you say? Be cause you can get really with them and find their spots.you can be so cool with them that they let you cuddle them. It feels nice. You should try it mr elder  secondly it is a good for a fames to to came in and look at the dogs ,cats it is so cool. We can have it in the summer like asper in summer sport in summer so dow it and you will be the best the end.  

Dear mum and dad

Today sas the saddest day of my life.

When we wer came into the shower

I was 3 people drowning in the ware then us docks got to the shower and just ran to the trees with the people that were wounded got we to the tree.we got a BIG BIG tert up and we sent docks to go get the wounded soldiers and help them to the tert or if thay cot not move thay would get other docks to help.when i was back at the shower i looked back at the BIG BIG bag in the water i thought to myself wiy wiy it you go.this is the 1 day.and he dey when a dock was trying toficks him up and he was in he bff hand. I do not know if this is my last leta that i will send i love you mum and dad xox   

                                                              

                                        

 i,m looking down at a 100 metre drop will this bridge hold me up ?or will i fall to my deeth? Dun Dun DUN! as i wake across the bride i her the riuer flowers and the trees blowing i thought to myself  what have i sind myself up to as i woke back akros the bridge i hear MRD saing go jenna go go you got this grill and  i finale get back and i say to MR D i DID not got it so i go to sit down and chorlotte said how did it go i?will i did not diy she say,s to me i am going  to go on it so she go i asked her the sam,s