Pet day

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Introduce argument at the start of each parograph. Mr ELDER we should have a pet day that we would be able to saw our pet off to our friends here are 3 reasons why.1p firstly it is so fun to train a dog. Why you say? Be cause you can get really with them and find their spots.you can be so cool with them that they let you cuddle them. It feels nice. You should try it mr elder  secondly it is a good for a fames to to came in and look at the dogs ,cats it is so cool. We can have it in the summer like asper in summer sport in summer so dow it and you will be the best the end.  

Dear mum and dad

Today sas the saddest day of my life.

When we wer came into the shower

I was 3 people drowning in the ware then us docks got to the shower and just ran to the trees with the people that were wounded got we to the tree.we got a BIG BIG tert up and we sent docks to go get the wounded soldiers and help them to the tert or if thay cot not move thay would get other docks to help.when i was back at the shower i looked back at the BIG BIG bag in the water i thought to myself wiy wiy it you go.this is the 1 day.and he dey when a dock was trying toficks him up and he was in he bff hand. I do not know if this is my last leta that i will send i love you mum and dad xox